24 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – The star”

1. but to put them back… really like that one!

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2. Lovely thoughts and last one is superb.

   • Thank you ;.)

3. Magnificent … The 3rd one blew my mind. Out of curiosity, what format are you following? I like these better than 5-7-5.

   • I’m not really following a format any longer… I rarely go over 5-7-5 sometimes 3-5-3 and sometimes 4-6-4 or something in-between. I just listen to how it sounds.

     • 🙂

4. So romantic ! And lovely!

   • Thank you 🙂

5. i love the romance too in the first one but that last haiku really shines

   • Thank you. 🙂

6. The first one is so wonderfully romantic and sexy!

   • Thank you 🙂

7. Wonderful set. The last one is a profound truth

   • Thank you 🙂

8. Beautiful series Bjorn, by the way, it doesn’t matter which format you use for your haiku, because a haiku just must feel good.

   • I agree.. when I started writing Carpe Diem I was strictly 575, but since then I’ve changed.

9. The last one tells the story with brutal honesty!

   Haiku My Star

10. What a gorgeous piece. Thank you for stepping outside the typical Haiku convention- it’ll inspire me to break Haiku barriers. And it’s obvious you listen to how it sounds as this is the poetic equivalent of the musical earworm. -Mike

11. Very nice haiku.

12. A fine post. I just love Vincent’s starry night 🙂 and your haiku trilogy.

13. I LOVE that last one!

14. Van Gogh’s Starry night is a treat any day. The haiku presented are treat for ever!!! Wonderful write indeed>

15. my favorite painting of all times! Don McLean’s song playing in my head….

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