Meet me at vesper – Trifextra

30 words plus honey, topple and paradigm (total 33 words) is Trifextra challenge this week

temptations of St. Anthony by Giovanni Battista Tiepolo

temptations of St. Anthony by Giovanni Battista Tiepolo


Lacing her words with honey she said:
“Meet me at vesper under the bell-tower”
He knew it would topple his vows and shake his paradigm,
but hesitating he went for her,
expecting freedom.



May 17, 2013

45 responses to “Meet me at vesper – Trifextra

  1. This smacks of illicitness! He won’t resist! The picture is perfect to accompany this post. It just adds that much more to the story. Love this.

  2. Ah Bjorn. A fellow Friday Fictioneer moonlighting in another writing challenge! Good to see you. Nifty little piece. Although I think it should be 30 words + 3 making 33 in total 🙂

  3. Love it. There’s some darkness in both of them and there was an entire sexy story here. One of my favorites

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