She was nine and waking up
A bicycle so red was hers today
Learn to cycle was her goal
So her father taught her well
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And she was cycling every day
I saw her coming home from school
And leave the house again to play
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He had been out with friends
A beer or two, and he was glad
In shiny car he eased his way
To come home to wife and child
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He never saw her coming out
And being numbed by drinks
That night he came too late
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And she is ten and waking up
Her shiny wheelchair by her bed
She calls for mom to help her out
And the she can almost get to school
~~
And today she’s nearly glad again
Some dreams are crushed of course
But other plans now fills her mind
~~
He thinks about the things he did
Evicted from the home she kept
But the pains are only for himself
And he opens up another beer
~~
Today he’s sober and he has a car
It’s rusty but it handles well enough
With the speed for painless death
~~
A crash against a mountain cliff
No braking tracks were there to see
His funeral a lonely one, and brief
But she recalls he took her bike away
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The consequences of drinking and driving are too sad to think about. Fortunately the story-poem is purely an imagined one, but I am sure it has happened many times.
October 7, 2012

intense.. and very good
Thank you, meant to be intense
This awesome. In some cases redemption is close to impossible.
Thank you.
amazing work, love this poem
Thank you John. It tells a story I have had inside a long time, and it has kept me strictly sober when I’m driving.
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