I write poetry and short stories. It all started when I started with twitter, and I got interested in haiku and very short stories (vss). As time grew I have also become interested in other metrics (limericks, tanka, iambic poetry etc). I started this blog to get beyond the 140 character limit. I am physicist by education, but have left that trade in pursuit of more business oriented matters.
In my poetry I often to be restricted to formal metric with clear rhythm and/or rhymes as applicable. Also I prefer to have challenge in terms of a picture or other prompt. I find inspiration in the words themselves, and combining with pictures. All my writings here is in English, which is my second language, so please be patient with some of my little language quirks. My first language is Swedish, and I live outside Stockholm.
If you want to learn more I was interviewed by Sherry Marr at Poets United a while ago.
I would have never known English was your second language. And why don’t you ever write free verse?
I do try, but it’s still pretty structured.
Dear Bjorn,
Thanks for ‘liking’ A Case of You. I’ll be checking in from time to time to see how your battle with entropy is going.
Aloha,
Doug
Your poems are lovely and very well written. Thanks so much for stopping by my blog
Thanks for visit yourself, had a wonderful evening yesterday reading poetry.
Hey, English is my second language too, I have entered some contests in the past and always got written off on grammar use. No matter haw hard we practice huh?! GL!
Hardest for me are plural s:s in third person. have nothing like it in Swedish.
The Dutch are famous for messing up English in the worst ways (after Germans), but I was lucky to live in the US for a year and get my TESOL degree there. This helps, a lot! When in doubt I always wiki grammar rules.
Have lived and worked in the US a number of times… To me I find Dutch people to be among the most fluent in English.
Perhaps when we speak, but not when we write, or maybe the other way around. I don’t honestly know but I do know that most of the time when I hear Dutch celebrities or politicians speak, I am ashamed of my folk!
Bjorn, I love your poetry (and photography) you write with apparent ease – the sign of a real talent.
Thank you, I exercise every day with 140 characters on twitter. Instant feedback.
I write poetry, too, and prefer to have a form as well. I am amazed that you see to write with such ease in your second language! Reminds me of Joseph Conrad, who had such a seemingly intuitive understanding of English.
Wow, thank you.. I have learned a lot during the last year, mainly through wordplay on twitter 🙂
You have a beautiful blog, Bjorn. I’ve enjoyed several of your haiku!
Thank you. I try and practice 🙂 Thank you for dropping by
Congratulations! I have nominated you for the Very Inspiring Blogger Award! Please go here to read about this award! thank you!
http://jlroeder.wordpress.com/2012/11/13/another-award-very-inspiring-blogger-award/
Hi Jackie, Thank you so much. But I think I will not continue this. I am happy for the nomination but I will not put it up on my page.
that is fine, many don’t do anything with it. It is just to show how much I enjoy your blog. You can do with it what you will. No problem.
You visited my blog and that led me here.
I really like your writing especially the poetry which I have always difficult. I look forward to reading more.
Dee
I will remember to write my 100 word stories as poetry then… I actually wrote a 100 WCGU as a sonnet a couple of weeks ago 🙂
https://brudberg.wordpress.com/2012/10/29/love-potion-100wcgu/
Can you hear the applause over there in Sweden?! To be able to write form poetry when English is your second language is amazing to me. I have enough problem with it and I’ve been speaking it for over 60 years. Bravo!
Thank you Victoria, I started a year ago to write limericks on twitter.. and then I have progressed. The daily rhymes I write there is excellent to progress quickly. And there are excellent online dictionaries to help. The most advanced I have written so far are two sestinas,,, that took several days.
I used to just write structured poetry, but have sense (over time) become more comfortable with free verse. I still love form poetry though.
Slowly slowly I am releasing the security blanket of form. At the same time there are so many old forms out there… The iambic forms add so much variations.
I have nominated your blog for the very inspiring blog award.The rules for accepting this award are:
You need to display the award certificate on your website.
Announce your win with a post and include a link to whoever presented your award.
Select 15 deserving bloggers.
display the blog’s name on your post that nominated you
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Hi. I have decided not to put these nomination on my blog. I appreciate the thought, but I will not continue any nominations.
Not a problem , however I would like to know if your decision has anything to do with myself or my blog. I like feedback as this is important . In any case I respect your decision. Merry Christmas
None at all, I appreciate the nomination and your blog. I love the comments on entries and leave my own pretty often. Merry Cristmas 🙂
Thank you I appreciate that you took the time to reply.
Hello! I’ve been enjoying your blog posts for a while now, so I thought I’d share an award with you. It’s called the 2012 Blog of the Year award. I hope you’ll keep writing beautiful poetry. http://everydayclimb.wordpress.com/2012/12/19/2012-blog-of-the-year/
Hi I share your interest in form. I’ve been experimenting with varying metres and rhyme schemes, particulalry Welsh. My interest in form comes from my need for a structure for my crazy thoughts. I’m looking forward to reading your poems.
I will look through your poetry. Been doing a little French inspired recently. I really love rondeau.
‘A Horseman’ is a sonnet. ‘The Devourer of Souls’ is a sestina. ‘Cotton Hill’ is written in a Welsh metre I can’t remember off the top of my head, and I’ve experimenting with ‘celtic knotwork’ schemes of internal rhyme.
Hi Björn. Having thoroughly enjoyed reading your poetry in 2012 I have nominated you for the Gargie Award.
With best wishes for a happy new year,
Alex.
http://newsrealpoetry.wordpress.com/2013/01/03/gargie-award/
Hey there I want to first thank you for your support and also show my appreciation for your work by nominating you for the Versatile Blogger award, feel free to check it out and participate if you want. 🙂 I look forward to watching your work.
http://literarylandofalysia.wordpress.com/2013/01/19/appreciation-for-the-nomination-versatile-blogger-award/
Thank you so much for the nomination, greatly appreciated. I have however decided to stay out of the award thing.. 🙂 but thanks again.
Thank for being on my my blog and its wonderful to read your lines here and to know about you
I like you. You have a poetic mind.
Eh … I think you have a poetic mind.
Thank you 🙂
Hmmm … Good fruit cannot come from a bad tree, can it.
I have changed my mind, Björn. I am not at all fond of your fruit.
Thank you for following my blog. I too love form poetry and short fiction, but I have been known to splurge into free verse as well!
But as you say, even free verse needs a certain structure, musicality and rhythm. I also love word play, which is sometimes a problem in a second language. I also write poetry in French, which is my second language.
I would love to able to write in French… But that’s more like my third or forth language 🙂
You have a wonderful blog here. I love your writing.
Thank you 🙂
My first love of writing is poetry. But since I got involved on the ‘net’ I’ve discovered other unique prompts and forms. Thanks for stopping by my first 100 word prompt for Friday Fictioneers.
🙂
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Hi Bjorn, thanks for dropping by and “liking” my first Friday Fictioneer story “Thunder”. I hope you’ll enjoy future ones too 🙂
Congratulations – you’ve won the Sunshine award! Click here to find out more http://theimaginator.wordpress.com/2013/03/24/sunshine-award/
Thank you so much, and so sorry for the nomination. But I have decided not to accept any nominations. Hope that’s OK.. I am very honored.
No problem, I completely understand 🙂
Hiya!
Bjorn, I’m not sure if you’ve been nominated already – and if you have, here we go again! – but if not, consider yourself nominated by me for the Very Inspiring Blogger Award. It’s to recognize others who consistently write great posts that the nominator looks forward to reading. My blog has my acceptance entry and the details…and congrats!
Tag – you’re it! http://theimaginator.wordpress.com/2013/04/23/tag-youre-it/
Hello friend! Yes, it’s ‘that’ time. I’m just following and passing along: You have been nominated for the “Very Inspiring Blogger Award.” Please view my page to accept and take part in this fun award. *hugs* 😀
Thank you so much, I’m greatly honored. But I made the decision early on not to do the nomination thing… I want to focus all my energy to writing new things.
But thank you so much.
No worries. I, too, had those feelings until yesterday. Be well B!
hey man,
when you get a chance, drop me an email
btm2007(at)yahoo.com
Wicked little Swede! No one should be allowed to write in a second language like that with such fluency…it is not natural:)
🙂 it’s only natural for a Swede.
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I’m very happy to have found you. Keep creating and sharing!
Namaste,
Kc
Thank you, I write every day 🙂 thanks for following
love you out look on life.Great blog.I gave you a follow so i’m hoping to see more from you.
I write new entries daily… I’ll flood you 🙂
Very interesting Bjorn. Being a physicist (you not me) I can fully understand your need for and love of formal metric and rhyming in your poems. Except for my utilization of the Japanese forms of poetry, I am all free form. Even when writing haiku I prefer to write without the 5-7-5 method.
I have also left the 575 metric in my haiku… I see it more as a maximum number of syllables..
That’s great. My studies were initiated when I found NaHaWriMo on Facebook and Graceguts the first started by Dylan Welch and the second written by him.
English is my second language too! I wonder how many of us ‘foreigners’ there are taking part in these little challenges.
There are a few I think.. I think there are even more in some of the poetry challenges.
I don’t feel comfortable writing poetry (yet?). The closest I have written is a haibun.
Haiku is great to start with – btw what’s your first language ?
French.
I know some poets that mix french and english… 🙂
Weird but interesting concept. Jag talar lite svenska också men jag kan inte skriva bra. Dock läser jag gärna Karin Boyes poesi.
Jag älskar Karin Boyes poesi.
🙂
Hi Bjorn, Here is the link for this week’s Ligo Haibun Challenge. Do take a look
http://call2read.com/2013/07/13/ligo-haibun-challenge-9/
I will take a look. Busy with warm weather 😉
Hi Bjorn. Nice to take a dip and have a look. I like your structured style, it keeps the reader focussed. 🙂
Thank you 🙂
I’m always so happy when browsing through the poetry topic of my reader I come across a very special writer and I believe it has happened today Iin finding your work. I think the writing I have seen so far is splendid and I look forward to following your work. 🙂
The same… I hang out on various prompts that give me inspirations… please link to any of those and we will see more of each other.
I definitely understand your need for structure when it comes to poetry. Thanks for your like! I can’t wait to see what great things you have in store 🙂
Hi Bjorn, Pls find this week’s Ligo Haibun Challenge below:
http://call2read.com/2013/07/27/ligo-haibun-challenge-11/
Hi, Do take a look at the challenge for this week. Thanks:)
http://call2read.com/2013/08/03/ligo-haibun-challenge-12/
The beauty of poetry is it’s a language unto itself. I was an ESL teacher (English as a Second Language) in NYC and I found that most people that learned English as a 2nd language knew it better than native speakers, especially where grammar is concerned. That includes myself.
Ah.. I think you are right.. poetry is a little different… and yes you can make things in poetry that makes it easier than prose actually… called poetic freedom 🙂
I thought English could be your second language because of your name, but didn’t actually believe it, cause you may have been born anywhere or living anywhere English-speaking for the better part of your life.
I also thought if it would be possible that you were physicist. For no particular reason, only because physics happens to be my favourite science and I happen to like your poetry. So, naturally, I united both 🙂 By that weird idea of mine you will know that I am no physicist.
English is my second language, too. Moreover, I started writing mainly in it and sharing on the web, when I got on Twitter. There I joined some writing and poeming communities, soo… it seems we took the same way to here.
Glad to have met you.
Sometimes I feel at advantage writing in a second language… and twitter has been and is a great school for learning poetry and words… Now I mostly hang out in different communities…
mm, actually, you are so right – about the advantage of writing in a second language. I am not any good in my own language, it’s so strange, even for my employers 😉
Congratulations, Björn!
I have nominated your blog for the Versatile Blogger Award.
More about this nomination is at
http://dearkitty1.wordpress.com/2013/10/20/versatile-blogger-award-thanks-horty/
I have nominated you for Most Influential Blogger Award. Please understand that acceptance is not requisite, but do know how much you have blessed me. Should you choose to receive this nomination, further info can be found on my post: http://booknvolume.com/2013/11/26/the-blushing-rose/
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Kul att träffas! Jag är Svensk också, född in Göteborg. Bodde där tils vi flyttade till USA i 1974 när jag var 9 år. Pappa är Svensk, Mamma Amerikansk. Jag har skrivit (skrivet? Svenskan är lite trögt äfter så många år) mycket om Sverige och min flyttning i April 2012 och 2013.
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Thank you for commenting on my blog post for Friday Fictioneers. I admire your ability to speak more than one language. And to wrIte poetry in a second language is a gift.. I live in India but can only speak certain words in an Indian language. I’ve tried but it’s been a losing battle as I don’t have a gift for it.. Also, many people here speak English so I usually don’t need another language.
Tjena! Your writing is beautiful, and particularly impressive for a second language! My Swedish is a work in progress, but I don’t think I’ll be writing poetry in it any time soon!!
Ha. best way I ever knew to learn a language..
An award for you at…
http://divebarbluestales.wordpress.com/2014/02/26/121/
Tjena Björn grym blogg 🙂 🙂 🙂
Hi Bjorn,
I wanted to let you know that I think you have a fab blog and I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award.
Should you wish to accept this award, please come check out my post at:
http://101challenges1001days.wordpress.com/2014/03/23/what-a-way-to-celebrate-my-100th-post-versatile-blogger-award/
– copy the versatile blogger icon from this post so you can insert this into your acceptance post.
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Please link back to my blog in your post, so I can check out your acceptance speech. 🙂
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like me, you see the power in restraints. tell me i can’t and i will show you the world…
Yes.. working within limits give the right power.
limits also give the wrong power, if there is a wrong in a multidimensional universe…
You write so beautifully in English. It motivates me to try harder in French as it is my second language. I am so impressed by your blog…your photos as well. Thanks so much for visiting mine too.
Jen shared the Puente form that she found at your place. But Puente I found was not by you. Just wanted to say thanks for sharing another short form. I haven’t tried it yet. ~Jules
I have taken the liberty to nominate you for the “Most Influential Blogger” award. 😀 For further information kindly see here: http://salvaveniaxxl.wordpress.com/2014/06/29/an-unexpected-honour/.
Happy greetings,
Salva
Thank you so much for your visits and especially for deciding to stick around.
Splendid Björn – fine piece, greatly enjoyed.
Dear. Bjorn – thank you for your kind wishes and your reading of my poetry ..l I have been remiss in. getting to your blog. Your writing is stunning and I am enormously impressed with your organization and the sparkling breadth of your talent – please do submit and be published !
We’ll see 🙂 I’m still in training..
Nice to meet you, my friend. Your haiku poetry is very well done. I look forward to following your blog. There are times where I also thrive on structured poetry. Mine is mostly free verse…subsequently I annoy the marbles out of true poets. Have the best of days. ~Audrey
HI,
I’m Tokoni, a student and poet. Its nice to meet you. I’d like to invite you to my blog at http://www.insanitybeautiful.wordpress.com if you’re interested. Thanks.
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Beautiful website. English is my first language, Southern is my dialect. I mainly write haiku and being an engineer, am anal about it. I follow the classic rules, to a fault. I have been known to and seen shaking my head, muttering about what I call fauxku. I write free form poetry as well, but like you, there is still form. I have often said, disaster is sure to happen when on changes an old bridge from four lanes to six, so haiku is always written according to.the.rules. but again, I have much enjoyed visiting and shall again visit. Thank you so very much for liking my poem. At times, it does seem the light is slow to return. I hope you will visit again and always feel welcomed. As we say in my southern dialect, y’all come back now, y’hear? 🙂
Ah.. yes form for me is also the classical form of sonnets, ghazal, villanelle etc.. recently when it comes to haiku I have put much more effort on kigo, and cuttingwords than the syllable count.. but it’s a matter of taste.
Yes, it is. I put the emphasis as well on kigo and cutting words. I overlook an extra syllable or so as long as kigo and cutting words are there. I am more forgiving of others than myself. I am responding via tablet and for the life of me, can’t figure how to insert links. I apologize. I also do a poetry only website, Aki no Koe (voice of autumn), should you be interested. I akways read the About pages of blogs to learn more about the person. I am going to enjoy receiving posts from you.
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You have very interesting blog and I like it very much! A lot of colorful photos and very clever articles! 🙂
Hi Bjorn,
Wanted to let you know that I nominated you for a Blogger Recognition Award – see my post at https://talesofeneana.wordpress.com/2015/09/15/blog-award-time/. I know not everyone participates in blogging awards, but I wanted to give you a big fat gold star, even if you decide not to accept the award!
Cheers!
Joy
Thank you so much.. I love being nominated, though I prefer not run with them.. 🙂
Thanks for your help with the link. It now seems to work. Ive never been to Sweden but my partner and I learnt some swedish at university many years ago. We met a Swede in Tavira Portugal who has opened a Swedish bar ! Look forward to following your blog and you can certainly touch hearts with your poetry so the English works well! Wish I could do the same in Spanish.
I’ve nominated you for The Versatile Blogger Award. Here’s the link!
https://hooklineandinkwell.wordpress.com/2015/11/02/the-versatile-blogger-award/
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Very interesting and intriguing. I’m wondering if you would try out a total freewrite poem, or we could swap styles somehow and post to each other’s blogs? Be fun.
Sounds like a lot of fun.. maybe something we could do as a collaboration.. I like your style, and though mine is quite iambic.. I think it would be fun… as you might know I’m quite involved in dVerse, maybe we could do something like a prompt on freewrite there… 🙂
That sounds great, I’m game for doing that there!
I did a freewrite poem a couple of weeks ago… https://brudberg.wordpress.com/2015/11/14/my-mist-of-thoughts/
That sounds great, I’m game for doing that there!
Hmm Might be something for next Thursday when I do the prompt… could you mail me at brudberg@gmail.com ? A guest hosting on freewrite would be cool..
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Hi Bjorn! Have you ever considered ‘flashers’? When I was in ERWA, (Erotica Readers and Writers Assoc.) from 2006-2010, I learned about flashers. They are 200 word stories….not just scenes. But they could be. A more arduous form is the 100 word flashers. I learned more about writing…and verbosity….by writing flashers than I learned from anything else. It also, the carefully chosen word discipline led me into Japanese forms. I did write whole ‘books’ of flashers….picking a theme and continuing on with a dramatic story….some of them were erotic, well, most of them at that time. But it’s a great discipline.
My best…..Jane
I actually do.. every week I write 100 word flashes for Friday Fictioneers.. usually great feedback and great writers… not so much erotica, but many many genres, and as you say a great discipline. You learn to create stories with all it’s elements, beginning middle end. Check it out, all my fiction tags are for that prompt…
I’ll do that! I used to love that discipline. Oh! 100 word flashers is like giving birth…damn hard. LOL!
I’ll definitely tomorrow check out all your fictional tags for that prompt.
Today, I finally put my brain in and wrote a tanka. It’s been quite a while that I have done so….and I have made violations (kigo word, etc) in the doing….but it was good to be back attempting that form again. I’ll post it on my blog.
Tomorrow it’s Open Link at dVerse… so that is a perfect moment…
Thanks, Bjorn.
I dig your blog and look forward to following!
How uncanny — a fellow physicist by education and ESL individual! Your amazing, seasoned writings (to which I am an immediate fan!) are surely the light at the end of my novicehood’s tunnel.
Thank you… I have found a few other physicists around. Hope to see you around some of the prompts
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I think flash and poetry are closely related in that they are “cool” mediums and should leave motivation/intention/meaning for the reader’s interpretation. Nice work on this one, Bjorn.
Oops! This should have been over on your story. I’ll copy and paste. Edit this one out, OK?
I have been to Sweden- Stockholm and Almhult. Can you guess who I worked for at the time- LOL! Beautiful country. One of my dearest friends is from Sweden as well. I really enjoy reading your poetry!
Ha… I can guess… only one company there. I live outside Stockholm… but I actually lived in Mesa for almost a year way back in the early 90’s
Wow! We have been here since 1997.
It is evident that you are a lifelong learner who continues to redefine himself. This is inspiring. Thanks for sharing a bit about your journey. I look forward to reading your poems.
It’s amazing that English is your second language! You’ve definitely excelled in the poetic aspects of English 🙂
Ha… I have a lot of fun writing…
Nice to meet you, I visited Sweden many moons ago … nice country!
I nominated you for a Leibster Award. I will NOT be offended if you don’t participate. These things are basically chain letters. I only participate out of respect for the people who nominated me.
https://nobbinblog.wordpress.com/2020/08/07/liebster-award/
Cool! I’m a physicist too! But lapsed – I teach engineering now. I don’t know why people think physicists are not creative or artistic. Your poetry is wonderful.
I work in procurement… so that is even further from physics.
Fascinating poem. Even in the absence of mirrors we see ourselves.