31 responses to “Waiting to be read”

1. Delightful, Björn, and it has to wait no longer! I love the thought of a poem being a ‘xenolith in sediment’.

   • A fun word to play with

     • Indeed.

2. Luv the xenolith metaphor

   much love

   • Thanks a lot.

3. Bjorn, love what you did with the word. Am spellbound by the image you chose.

   • Sometimes gems can be so fascinating.

4. Brilliant Björn and great image too🙌

   • Thank you

5. for those who wander lost
   it’s a ditty
   waiting to be read.

   In time it’ll be read! Great close Bjorn! Great lines and matching image!

   Hank

   • It seems like it is being read.

6. I really like the creativity in this poem. Nicely done Bjorn.

   • Thank you 🙂

7. I like the thought of a poem being a “xenolith in sediment” and “it’s a ditty,” a fascinating little (or not-so-little) object that perhaps will inspire.

   • Well 44 words is quite little

8. ‘ditty’ feels out of place in this poem but then that works perfectly as the xenolith metaphor 👍 Nice one Björn 👏

   • 44 words is not not an epic at least.

9. Thats joy. It will lead to home. The metaphor sits perfect.

   • Thanks … home is a good place.

10. And what a glowing beacon it is! Jae

    • Thank you

11. How perfectly expressed! (And yes, that picturde is amazing.)

    • Oops, I mean picture

      • Ha.. I kind of love that misspelling 🙂

12. This is the best poem I read today, and I’m stopping here.

    • Thank you 🙂

13. I really like this metaphor–the rough poem with a “gemstone edge.” Beautifully crafted!

    • Thank you… I think it worked well as a metaphor

      • You’re welcome! It did.

14. Love the crossover ~ ‘xenolith to hidden verse’, Bjorn. A lovely poem!

    • Thank you 🙂

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