While waiting for the rain

Poetry is a cloudy day in summer,
a veiled sun with assurance of rain
weightless like a kettlebell resting.
It is promise and a riddle,
unmoving, stillborn until read,
but when spoken
wings unfold, a bat or butterfly
depends on sun and moon,
the time of day or
if whispered to a westward wind,
or if night and moon conspire
with the reader’s dreamscape
to bring the rain and soak the soil.

Waiting for the Rain
Harmony Hammond

Today Grace hosts dVerse MTB with a challenge to write Ars Poetica, I thin I missed it when we did it before, and my thought was that a poem becomes poetry only when read.

June 25, 2026

25 responses to “While waiting for the rain

  1. Beautiful writing and reading process – A promise and a riddle. I specially like: with the reader’s dreamscapeto bring the rain and soak the soil.

  2. I love the thought of poetry as ‘a cloudy day in summer’, Björn, and ‘promise and a riddle’; it seems that we spend our lives solving riddles that are ‘unmoving, stillborn until read’; and such a wonderful ending!

  3. Poetry is indeed a riddle and a promise. Waiting to be deciphered and shared. Perhaps, the rain brings growth to a thought that becomes a poem once shared. But, it begs can it still be a poem if it isn’t shared?

  4. All art is an interaction with the viewer/ reader, Björn, there is no guarantee that the reader will understand a poem the way the poet meant it and people often forget that when it comes to poetry – so well said…

  5. I like the idea of your poem. And like this line “It is promise and a riddle”. I think when reading poetry you say it in your head at least.

  6. and moon conspire
    with the reader’s dreamscape
    to bring the rain and soak the soil

    Great close Bjorn. I like the idea of a ‘conspiracy’ of the writer and the reader to bring out the resultant poem into the open

    Hank

  7. How beautiful. I especially love:

    “It is promise and a riddle,
    unmoving, stillborn until read”

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