26 responses to “Saturnalia”

1. “high on wizardry fungus
   twisting and leaping
   in clamor and rumpus
   and no-one was sleeping
   cops came a’knocking”

   Fabulous lines.🚨🚔🚨

   • Thank you so much… sometimes it’s fun to play with rhymes.

2. I love enjoyed the pace and rhyming of your Saturnalia, Björn, which evokes a Saturday booze-up, not that I’ve been on one of those in a very long time. I especially like the ‘Cheshire smiles’ and ‘wizardry fungus’.

   • It was so fun to play with rhymes… (or b-rhymes) in case of fungus and rumpus

     • I can see that!

3. Ah the good old days, even with the bad bits. There is something to be said for being a party animal.

4. those were the days, uh

   but i was always one for awkard situation avoidance, so i missed that kind of fun

   luv your quadrille

   much♡love

5. Crazygood, Bjorn. Thanks.

6. Boy I have my share of these days:

   and no-one was sleeping
   cops came a’knocking
   and sent us to lockup
   it wasn’t too shocking

   when I was much younger, of course. I like the last line because no one is shocked when a bunch of young men decide to booze-up and have a wild rumpus. Thank you for your poem.

7. Quite a party! I’ve heard about those. 😁

8. Ohh… wizardry fungus is a delight! This sounds like some of the parties we had in the Air Force. I enjoyed your playful rhyme.

9. 😀 Now thats what I call a party Björn 🥳

10. I remember! (parts are a little vague)

    Fun poem!

11. haha – wizardry fungus – enjoyed all the rhymes it brought a smile.

12. That party does look wild! I want some wizardry fungus too!

13. LOL, lovely rhyming and plenty of verve.

    • I could not comment on your poem… but I think almost everyone think that what is happening now is way beyond what’s acceptable.

      • Thanks, Bjorn.

14. Around and Around by Rolling Stones comes to mind!

15. Your choice words and flow within your poem is vivid and fantastic. Also, I am fully aware of the Saturday night booze and wild events.

16. Now, that’s a party! Great quadrille, Bjorn!

    Yvette M Calleiro 🙂

    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

17. LOVE your quadrille, Bjorn … the rhythm and the pacing are perfection.

18. “with Cheshire smiles
    high on wizardry fungus
    twisting and leaping
    in clamor and rumpus”

    I love the fast paced rumpus!

19. I miss the days of wizardry fungus and cheshire smiles too.

20. Wild ride in your quadrille, Björn—feels like I can hear the music and laughter echoing off the walls.

    ~David

21. Lol. Too much vodka had me belly dancing on a table top. Next day at the mall a stranger walked up and complimented me on my dance. Then showed me the photos she had taken. OMG.

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