30 responses to “(Unnamed) Cherita”

1. I love that your cherita starts with an alliterative compound word, Björn, and the heavy canopies above the meandering footpath. Did you mean one final thrust?

   • I meant tryst…. now corrected

2. I also the alliteration and the imagery of the heavy canopy. Kim wondered if you meant thrust, and I wondered if you meant tryst. I imagine secret lovers.

   • Of course tryst…

     • That sounded like you. 😊

3. So sweet, and I just ‘knew’ you meant tryst .. or at least I hoped. LOL

   • tryst is of course correct

4. What can I say? Beautiful writing as always.

5. I had to look up (Cherita) and find out what it means. I am now a fan of the concept. The imagery of the footpath and meandering. Dude, I miss your work so much. 🙂

   • A very short and brief poem… still telling a story

     • I might try this out myself one day. I’ll see what I can tell within a short story.

     • Check it out… it’s fun…

     • Thank you, Bjorn. 🙂

6. luv the free easy flow of thought in your cherita

   Bravo!!!

   much♡love

7. I love the format of the verses across the page, like following the footpath for the one final tryst.

8. Bjorn, I love the shelter of hushed forest. Perfect place for a final tryst (as long as you make sure no poison ivy around.)

9. There is just a little sadness in the end: a final rendezvous, a final meeting at the end of a secret path. One is forced to ask, what caused this ending? A very nice poem. Thank you for posting it.

10. Oooh, this is good!

11. Lovely opening and creation of setting.

12. I really like this form, as much as a haiku, with the opportunity for the setting of a story to the descriptive scene…something magnetic about it…the key is simplicity, and not overreach, as here.

13. I see you are still wandering through the forest from the last prompt..Hard to leave behind!

14. I love both verse and the shape of your words. I find myself walking along.

15. I love the walk through the canopy. ☺️

16. Beautiful, Bjorn.

17. I like the shadows of the leaf canopy. A forest adventure.

18. Lovely! Very atmospheric, and I like that hint of the romantic.

19. Beautiful Björn – captures the forest perfectly 💕

20. “heavy canopies shadow the sky”

    Beautiful line, Bjorn.

21. Björn, “one final tryst” feels like such a tender close — I can almost feel the hush beneath those heavy canopies.

    ~David

22. I like this. It’s mysterious and secretive 💚

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