17 responses to “Midsummer water”

1. the watery connections are lovely so too the way you brought round the entangled from the opener to the feel of hair through fingers

   • Thank you… the connection to midsummer has some very special memories for me.

2. very beautiful poem.

3. Your Midsummer water is gorgeous, Björn! I especially love the phrase ‘dusk entangled with dawn’ and the ‘honeysuckled kiss’.

   • It feels strange when it never gets really dark…

4. love this

5. interesting to hear about the increase in briths around March – love is in th summer air
   — and in your prose, I could feel this healthy, sensual connection with well-conditioned hair (not all conditioners are created equal)

6. I really loved that second stanza. Nicely done Bjorn.

7. I really enjoyed the second line in relation to a sleepless summer night.

8. A heated midsummer, water which is needed to cool down. ha….romance is in the air.

9. So romantic and sensual at the same time, Bjorn.

10. I’m not sure if anyone who has not been to the north really knows of the power of the midnight sun…beautiful, romantic time, and here, beautiful, romantic lines which I think exemplify the mood and feeling at that time of the year. V nicely done.

    • I really liked yours as well, and the them of a nordic wood is indeed similar

11. You share the magic of memories of love at a special time of year Björn Midsummer is special everywhere but especially in the North in counterpoint to the long Winter – not surprising that love blooms so, then…

12. The art, the words …. Incredibly lovely Bjorn. You have a way with sensuality, I am certain of that.

13. I love this line:

    Embracing our sleepless summer night

    You are one remarkable poet, Björn!

14. “Like water, your hair through my fingers”

    Breathtaking, Bjorn!

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