No castles of sand

“It’s not a lie”
“it’s not a lie”
“it’s not a lie”

it’s many lies,
based on lies,
based on more lies
based on a pebble of truth
a grain of sand
beached in the waves
of hyperbolic wrath

the grain is a gem
to be found
to be wrapped
and layered in blankets of truths
to build something better
than castles of sand.

Sand Castles in Your Mind Last Forever
David Michael Hinnebusch

Today Melissa hosts dVerse with a prompt on Lies to celebrate April fools day. I do not think I need any more lies as it seems every day I open the news not quite comprehending that this is actually true.

April, 1 2025

26 responses to “No castles of sand

  1. Nicely done, Björn. We have to sift through sand for truth these days and I am really fed up with lies. I try to avoid the news, if possible,

  2. You’ve nailed the situation very well. The trouble is, when lies are spewed often enough, the same ones over and over, they take on the veil of truth for so many.

  3. A captivating artwork to go along with your poem, Björn. The repeated lines “It’s not a lie” in the beginning really stood out for me. People try to convince us of what is true. I think most of it is sand anyway.

  4. i read this more as “voices in one’s own head” than a political piece (but reading other’s comments, i can see how it could be interpreted as such). beautiful artwork too!

  5. The message, way you used repetition, relevancy, truth … work beautifully. Love it, Bjorn.

  6. captivating! Just In: Significant Development in [Ongoing Debate About Artificial Intelligence] 2025 adorable

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