Beneath her bangs
that sultry gaze
enkindles
in my flesh and mind
desire, lust and loss
of plans
except to fall
devoted on my knees,
begging
begging
her to tether
tightly me
or forever set me
free to seek
my fortune in
forgetfulness alone
Today Punam hosts the Quadrille at dVerse and the word is Bang.
December 9, 2024

I only know that hairstyle as a fringe, Björn, but I love the way you evoked desire and lust.
That is what AI thought were Bangs… 🙂
Mesmerization, just like a tiger mesmerizes its prey. I feel the hunger of the tiger and the plea for mercy of the prey. Good one, Bjorn.
Thank you… mercy comes in many ways.
p.s. all those fingers are damned creepy. gives the image of a spider in a web, waiting for the bug
Now I’m reminded of Cat People…
Famous last words: “I’m not like you.”
What a sultry write, with wonderful alliteration! She does look mesmerizing despite those fingers.
Dangerously so
Absolutely.
Sensual and sexy!
🍑🍆
nice one
Much❤️💚love
🙏
Most decent word play there I must say…I am moved to ponder on her identity…a verse that goes far when playing with the setting as a reader…she looks professional to me, adding extra layers
She could be…
Ha ha… that is one scary creature for sure! Well done.
Yes scary and enchanting at the same time
I can see you enjoy the exotic!
Her bangs enhance those entrancing eyes… but those fingers?!
AI cannot count on fingers. It is a common error.
That sultry gaze is mesmerizing under the bangs. Good one Bjorn, including the AI photo.
Indeed… they look very cool
Very nice.
Love it Björn… 👌🏼✌🏼🫶🏼🎼
steamy!
Repeated words or phrases go a long way. “begging, begging” worked perfectly in this!
Thank you, appreciate your comment
Forgetful aloneness sounds unhappy.