35 responses to “Again, like before”

1. This is so good, Björn. I like how it slips from daffodils to a romance–and with the hint that it ended. I love

   “we
   listen for love calls
   of daffodil sentinels . . .”

   • It is a wonderful time of the year I think…

     • It is!

2. I’d have never guessed so many daffodil names were included here. It flows seamlessly.👏🏻

   • I thought a while to try to include every one of them… 🙂

3. ATTENTION!! I salute you. Amazing how you built a poem around the words! How clever you are.

   • Oh thank you so much

4. sing when Spring arrives a good reason to

   much♡love

   • Yes… I will remember to do that.

5. What’s not to love about spring and daffodils?!

   • Nothing — they are lovely

6. Wonderful.

   • Thank you

7. Nicely done.

   • Thanks

8. Makes me want a real Spring, we don’t have much here in South Texas. You did well with the prompts, I also used them, as first sentence words.

   ..

   • I have spent some time in really warm and sunny weather… but it just drew me crazy… I love the variation.

9. I love the way you captured the return of spring, Björn, and the way we await it like a surprise even though it doesn’t change that much. I especially enjoyed the ‘love calls of daffodil sentinels giving sun salutes and silver smiles’.

   • There were some really wonderful words to use….

10. Björne, the daffodil names were fabulous! I enjoyed how you created a romantic spin to your poem. It celebrates spring in all the right ways.

    • The names helped a lot, and spring felt near when I wrote the poem

11. Daffodils come later in your part of the world. This is a great image…

    daffodil sentinels
    giving sun salutes
    and silver smiles,
    for soon-to-be spring,

    • Daffodils are a still a month away… we call them easter-lillies…

      • How nice. Whatever works for you. :>)

12. There’s nothing like the longing for spring! Ours has sprung and it’s wonderful 🙂

    • The only green thing here is that of envy.

      • Patience 🙂

13. Did it end or is it the return of spring. that is being evoked..

    • Spring will spring soon.

14. This poem is so gorgeous and makes me love my favourite time of year even more 🌼

    • I do love that time, but we are still waiting…

    • I do not think there is anything that can make me love spring any more.

      • 🌼💛🌼

15. We are all listening for those love calls. In the meantime, silver smiles…(K)

16. I love the repeated ‘s’ sounds in this.

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