Wrapped in the dusk, through depths of the snow
My poem is a wolverine searching for prey
It follows scents of blood feeding its growth.
Swiftly fluid, poem and shadow mutually grey,
My poem leaves in its tracks hunger and death
crossing the mountain into the valleys deep
following fever of deer to its final breath
my poem writes itself as the world is asleep.
My poem slumbers at dawn, sated and filled
putting trust in edge of its teeth and its claws.
and the nights to follow with guts to be spilled
the track of my poem can never be thawed
until the morning a hunter have tracked me
when snow is stained red by the foot of my tree.
Today Dora hosts dVerse with a prompt using Carol Ann Duffy Bees from The Bees: Poems (2016) (source) and Ted Hughes (1930-1998), The Thought Fox from The Hawk in the Rain, 1957 (source) writing a poem of any animal of our choice (real or mythological) as a metaphor for how ideas and words take shape for you on a blank page.
January 9, 2023

The kill or be killed stance towards poetry is a little frightening, and yet wholly natural in the way a poem feeds on the poet’s imagination, memories, psyche as well as the reader’s. A wonderful, mysterious take, Björn.
The wolverine is so mysterious… I once saw one from a distance and it has left a lasting impression.
For me, it is letting your passion and hunger for words lead you to whatever it is, embracing darkness and death (final breath). The third stanza stands out for me with: my poem can never be thawed. The wolvering is a powerful muse.
it is … and yes there is something about the hunt that speaks to me as a poet.
*wolverine*
A stunning sonnet, Björn, and I love the idea of a poem as a ‘wolverine searching for prey’. I know that situation when a ‘poem writes itself as the world is asleep’. You might want to amend ‘My poem leave in its tracks…’ to ‘My poem leaves in its tracks…’
Thank you for the correction… writing a poem is always a hunt following scents and tracks.
A poem may be a wolverine, or it may be a shark that needs to keep swimming else it dies in still water. A shark with gaping teeth, each tooth a verse in iambic pentameter, each pentameter a blood drop from a previous meal . . .
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You should write that to the prompt at dVerse…
really enjoyed this. hunting for my words just like the wolverine
Yes.. and those words leaves a scent.
The Wolverine is indeed a mysterious creature and a great analogy to writing Björn🙌
and also a creature loving its solitude
I love that the way you wrote it, it can feel not just like the hunt, but thrill of the chase and finally catching up and confirming that all of the wildness of the inspiration – was real. I am also loving and am curious about both of us using the colour ‘gray’ in these poems; it, to me, speaks of neutrality and open-mindedness, during the ‘hunt’ or the process of writing – instead of succumbing to the Black or White.
Indeed… being a poet often means thriving in ambiguity
Bjorn, this is magnificent. I am especially struck by the last two stanzas.
Thank you… I enjoyed writing in following the steps through the snow.
I love the intensity of this journey. It mirrors well the effect of your verse. (K)
Intense and so much needed for a hunter.
A dark writer you are indeed! What a great comparison to the Wolverine!
The wolverine is a nocturnal animal…
Perfect for you poetry!
On the hunt for words, the quest continues onward. Leaving imprints where one travels.
Happy New Year Bjorn!
Exactly… a path across the white canvas
The poet is a stalker and hunter of words and ideas. I like the idea of the poem as a wolf.
A wolverine is quite different from a wolf… the wolverine is a lone hunter whereas wolves hunt in packs…
Oh wow, I had no idea. Thank you for letting me know. 🙂
Björn, the imagery of the poem and the wolverine intertwined, swiftly fluid and mutually grey, is evocative. The parallels drawn between the poem’s hunger for words and the wolverine’s hunger for prey create such a powerful metaphor… Well done!
❤
David
Always hunting for words…
🏹🦌
The prompt is making me aware of the animal kingdom. I like the warning towards the end to the hunter! 😄
One day we will all fall victim to something.
The wolverine as tracker / hunter is a perfect metaphor for the neverending urge to create, to write poetry.
I have only ever seen tracks in the snow… they are nocturnal and hunting alone.
The stealth of the predator looking for opportunities. Well done!
Leaving a trail as evidence you’ll be back…
Indeed…. and maybe we are all predators of words.
Poor wolverine. But they read a lot of headlock, and they mean a little buggers. Nice Björn ! 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
They are much hated by the sami because they slay the reindeer…. but they are fascinating creatures.
I enjoyed the choice of wolverine, and the visual of the poem following the scent of blood for its growth.
I have always been fascinated with the wolverine, just seeing their tracks in the snow I always wonder what they have been up to.
Your poem has a lot of personality
Thank you… I am not sure I am that “bad”
This is a unique approach towards writing poetry Bjorn.
We all follow our own path towards writing… each track is unique
Indeed. That’s so true
Great use of metaphor!
Thank you… it came to me when thinking about animals I had a little knowledge of.
I enjoyed reading this piece, Björn! Not only does it conjure the primeval need to survive (through writing), but also to grasp a momentary experience and make it last. My heart throbs, my nostril smells blood, my being feels the hunt. Powerfully written 💜
Thank you, exactly what I wanted to push… (and to write a sonnet)
I love the poem and the animal!
You see me shiver with antici-Pation!
Ha… thank you.
Björn, this is fantastic! And it so encapsulates the kind of poetry you write. I love this.
This is perfect for your style of writing, Bjorn.
You are mysterious, and your dark side swirls
in grays and blacks.
I’ve always known there was something sinister lurking in the library.👁️
Interesting poem in so many ways, Bjorn. First is that it is set in winter. I like how the wolverine both tracks its prey and is being tracked at the same time. Love this line:
“my poem writes itself as the world is asleep.”
The wolverine is the State Animal of Michigan.