Come closer,
closer than cuddled
undo our clothes,
touch me, tickle
brush me lightly
with fingertips fiery
let lips be fused
turn me slicker, silly
knead me, rub me,
burn me fervent,
faster, faster…
tie me tighter.
smothered in silk
forever yours
servant, slave

Henri de Toulouse-Lautrec
Lisa hosts the Quadrille at dVerse and the word is brush. As usual a Quadrille is a 44 word poem using the given word.
October 2, 2023
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This made me laugh.😄
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This is so passionate. Whew!
Just in 44 words… too short maybe
Poetic scorched earth! How can anyone follow this fiery conflagration in 44!?
Thank you… maybe with a fire extinguisher…
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What a … stirring poem! The painting gives it that extra oomph ❤
I always write my poem first and find the artwark afterwards…
brushed up the erotic here – loved all those verbs and the pace of the poem too!
Thank you
What long winter nights are for.
We need some heat
Eco-friendly.
Very sexy quadrille
Happy Monday
Much💛love
Beautifully written!
I think we would all sign up for that! (K)
Whew! An extremely hot read Bjorn! Full of passion!
brush me lightly
with fingertips fiery
– an evocative way to incorporate “brush”
Well, that was hot! 🔥 Wowza!
Steamy. The tight quick verses really build the heat.
Graphic and evocative indeed! Way interesting direction to take that prompt!
Brilliant!
Bjorn, can’t much more intimate. I had to ask google what your “silly
knead me” meant, our cat used to do that and purr. Learn something new every day.
I am a fan of Lautrec since we visited the Henry Lautrec museum in Toulouse. It is great!! I have a print of yhe portrait of his friend, wearing a gentleman’s old timey hat, that has become classic.
Too, thank you also, for the big BDay wish. It is on the 30th, I probably wont write that day, I plan to run away for it. I do that a lot, Mrs Jim has gone with me. Been to some nice places. Maybe I can teach her, we’ll learn together how it’s done, kneading.
Again, “loved” your poem. Forgive me for writing so much here, it is a bedside note, Goodnight.
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Oooh, sexy!
forever yours
servant, slave
Love your close Bjorn! Invariably men would lose their strength in bed in their desire to maintain gentleness!
Hank
Uhm… Wow…
❤
David
I love the intensity, the passion, unbridled, real ….