a/maze(d)

His life’s a/maze
of songlines, blind-
alley-stanzas
& unrhymed end-stops, but
there are days when
he’s been enjambed
riding on a roller coaster metaphor,
where sometimes
just before the final plunge
vistas has been opened;
being so exquisite
that they will be forever inked
inside his library
of everlasting images.

Sometimes the librarian
asks himself:
is the library the venue
where his dreams unwind
into a new reality
or are his dreams made from
words already in existence?

Labyrinth
David Burliuk

Today it is Open Link at dVerse with the posibility to either link up your one poem or attend locally either today at 3 PM EST or on Saturday at 10 AM EST. The link to the meeting will be published at our site and I will be hosting

Thursday
Saturday

Hope to see you either linking up or as a participant. We are using Google to connect for the time being as it gives us a full hour to meet for free

September 14, 2023

29 responses to “a/maze(d)

  1. is the library the venue
    where his dreams unwind
    into a new reality
    or are his dreams made from
    words already in existence?

    A beautiful, fascinating question, Sir!


    David

  2. Dear Bjorn, as an ex librarian – back in the day when I had a proper job! I resonate with this and its insights every more deeply… Love the xperession of your question too. Echoes of Borges too, of course…

  3. This is exquisitely drawn, Bjorn! I especially love; “there are days when he’s been enjambed riding on a roller coaster metaphor, where sometimes just before the final plunge vistas has been opened.” 💙💙

  4. Inspired by the librarian earlier in the week I visited our library today and it was a treasure trove,-I think the library is the venue
    where his dreams unwind
    into a new reality.

  5. Can both be true, and will the “new reality” be all the more richer for it?! Love the a/maze/ment! Love the librarian’s questing mind and the magic realism mystique.

  6. I love the aged librarian, Björn, and now I have the poem in front of me, I can see the wordplay in the title and opening lines. – I especially like ‘blind-
    alley-stanzas & unrhymed end-stops’ and the final question. In future, I will be wary of being ’enjambed riding on a roller coaster metaphor’!

  7. Oh, yes, this! I love your librarian. I always wanted to be one. I especially like the first few lines, the blind-alley stanzas and unrhymed end-stops. But the final question, as it must, remains unanswered.

  8. I love this poem Björn and I would love to see a collection of all your librarian poems – as wordsmiths the librarian is such a telling metaphor…

  9. I love the question at the end, and it does seem like something the librarian would ask himself.
    I also really liked: “there are days when
    he’s been enjambed”

  10. that they will be forever inked
    inside his library
    of everlasting images.

    To think that efforts are already made for the storage of such creations! Great write Bjorn! Love it!

    Hank

  11. This made me smile because I relate. There are so many combination of words that we struggle to put together to make something new. Is that possible?

  12. The librarian questioning dreams. Each volume on the shelf is a dream of sorts as the words transport the reader. I went in a huge corn maze today. I was amazed with all the twists and turns. Standing tall amongst cornstalks.

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