Every dream is a cross-road
where the pilgrim in you
is offered the choice
between dragon and mice
or whetstone and knife
and you’re given advice
from the lies of a dice
and hence
It takes courage to dream.
I dare you to sleep.
Today it’s Quadrille again at dVerse. The word is dragon.
Ooooh, clever, Björn
Yes it does take courage to dream and to live the dream.
Dreams can offer you a lot of things except choice…. (maybe)
“dragon and mice
or whetstone and knife”
Ooooo. I love this!
Although I would never believe dice, I enjoyed the rhymes in your quadrille, Björn, and I would choose the dragon every time. I love the lines:
‘It takes courage to dream.
I dare you to sleep’.
I like those pounding rhymes in the middle section, it really racks up the emotional intensity.
An interesting challenge, the very real addiction of gambling versus the fantasy nightmare of dragons; enjoyed the clever rhyming too.
I liked the rhymes too. One to ponder.
Excellent!
This is wonderful. Really wonderful.
It takes immense courage to dream, the courage of a dragon. It is not for the timid, not for the mice Björn.
I love comparing the dream to a journey.
well written, like your analogy here
Tough choices here
Brilliant rhyming, Bjorn. A 5 star performance!
Interesting poetic options
“between dragon and mice
or whetstone and knife”
very Grimm’s fairy tale-ish; Nice
much love…
Nice.
This is quite compelling, I dare you to dream. I will take you up on that dare but, who knows where the dreamscape will take me tonight. I will leave it up to a roll of the dice.
clever rhyme scheme as well
I agree that the rhyme builds up the intensity and heightens the need to escape the capriciousness of the dice. Discerning truth is one of our most fundamental tasks. Choosing a path, to fight or prepare, wait it out or rush in, requires all our courage.
This translates well in waking life, as well – to live life to the fullest.
Ah those choices, such is life, I love what I felt as a se-saw effect in the rhythm.
“Every dream is a cross-road”
“I dare you to sleep”
Beautiful poem, especially these lines. Well done!
I like this very much. The choice of dragons and mice, has such a mystical ring to it. 🙂
looking into the future in any way (cards, dice, horoscope, etc) terrifies me. I don’t want to know… Dreaming is great and yes, choices must be made or our dreams will just wither and die. How to get there – but making no choices, in my opinion, is worse than stagnating, being too scared to dare…
Well done, quick pace. Made it a touch eerie.
Excellent! Love the rhythm and imagery in this one!
Oh, this is clever. I like the rhymes, and then that final statement!
Nice, tight rhythm to this. Dare to dream, indeed!