The creature from the black water
tries in vain to hide her webbed feet
in second hand Manilo Bhlanik slippers.
Otherwise she dresses plain
in old sealskin, kelp and ghostnets.
If you walk by the shore
a late evening in November, you might
sense her reek of lavender and codliver oil,
as she slips up behind you
from the depth of water humming
wordlessly and slightly out of tune
“Hush little baby don’t you cry”.
When she wraps her flabby arms around
your neck she’ll scream the only word she knows
“Rosebud, rosebud, rosebud” as if she knew
the inner world of you and Charles Foster Kane.
The creature from the black water
hates less what’s innocent and pure
than the guilty conscience of a
troubled mind like yours,
and unless you wear a pink bandaid on your left
knee, you’re doomed do swim forever
in her cold conscience
wrapped inside the snowglobe of your mind.
Writing about a monster with certain criteria for Izzy at toads.
She wears Manilo Blahnik slippers
She hums on “Hush little baby don’t you cry”
She only knows the word “Rosebud”
and if you wear a pink bandaid on your left knee you are safe.
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October 26, 2018
Bjorn, I like your “Manilo Blahnik slippers” to cover her web feet. She is scary, alright, I am thinking a convert of the “California Hotel” chain. My worst fear is large women who are taller than me.
I am partially webfooted with two toes on each foot. It runs in my family, I wear sandals.
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Wow … this one is really chilling! Wonderful, creepy imagery, Björn.
What fun this is! The manilo blahnik shoes are a good touch and mos def unexpected.
Surprise is a great element for monsters
How fun she is…love the bandaid bit.
Ah, such a clever blend of whimsy and ghoul! I loved this from beginning to end!
I LOVE this, especially hiding her webbed feet in the snazzy slippers…..but her cod liver oil perfume would not be pleasant, lol. So clever!
Love this! The slippers were a great touch, as was the pink bandaid.
Scary and funny at the same time. I was spellbound reading this as it had such great imagery.
You had me from the opening lines! What an awesome write, Bjorn.
Must find my stash of pink band aids.