We watched the solstice sky, and saw
in silence how the dusk and dawn
became a fleeting shadow as you beamed
for birdsong never ceasing to our dreams.
This is for Frank at dVerse. Couplets for Solstice. Been quite busy with other things. But needed to write.
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June 23, 2018
This is truly lovely
Lovely!
Interesting in its brevity….
Nice one.
Clever the rhyme scheme couplet ending without the [sound]
Thanks for dropping by to read mine Björn
Muc h💞love
Couplets always seem to come with a bit of their own magic. I love the way yours capture the instant.
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Beautiful couplets Bjorn ~ Enjoy your weekend ~
I like that never ceasing birdsong as we watch in silence.
An effortless write-( you made it look so easy) Beautiful.