Name your poison:
me;
dirty elixir
and shaken chaser,
sour wind
or
tonic,
tipsy moon between
your sheets
from vesper into
dawn.
It doesn’t matter
cause for me
it’s you and only
you.
Today De wants us to go to the bar at dVerse by using bar terms in a way that has very little to do with drinking or alcohol. She also wants us to write in 33 words or less, which for me (naturally) means writing in exactly 33 words. Come and see the complete list of words when the bar opens at 9 PM CET.
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February 7, 2017
That debauched-looking putto is obviously drinking some of that ‘dirty elixir’ 🙂
I like the idea that the other person is someone’s poison.
cool poem of dirty elixir, Björn 🙂
Love this Valentine!!!
A fun valentine for sure, using damn near all the terms.
My goodness this is incredible! ❤️
My goodness this is absolutely incredible! 😀
Great poem Bjorn – love the tipsy moon between the sheets!
Yummy.
I love that his pee stream mirrors the flow of the wine. That’s hilarious. 🙂
Bravo sir…fantastic wordplay.
Hilarious art work….and I lOVE the title! Well done, my friend.
I love what you did with me and you, bold. Very clever.
What can I say? Very entertaining: both poem and picture 🙂
Great take on the prompt. don’t know where you found the little cherub, very funny
this made me smile…tipsy moon between your sheets..
you did a lot with those 33 words. It’s great! I think you enjoyed yourself.
Dear Bjorn, as ever wonderful poetic musings. I believe there are certain shades of me within the subject matter. I may have to deem you my official poet. I am always amazed at artists like yourself and other wordpress-brother-in-arms such as http://richardankers.com/author/richardankerswrites/. So much heart, colour, style and depth in so few words. Much appreciated sirs, keep them coming. Regards. S.
tipsy moon between
your sheets
Wondering how it had got caught between the sheets.
Hank
Great little teaser…tipsy is the key!
Having been called both “poison” and “elixir” by my late-husband I grinned hard at this.
I know I commented. It seems it got lost in the ether. Love that “tipsy moon,” especially.
It seems to be a problem commenting on my blog… very strange…
Such fun reading your tipsy humor, Bjorn. That image is a spritzer to my day. 🙂
I just commented and it disappeared in the ether, also. 😦
Oh! There it is! Never mind! 🙂
Beautifully expressed. The imagery in your words create a whole new vision.
oh i like this. also enjoy that hidden symbolism…yourself as the moon.
wonderful!
Funny! I also wrote about a person being one’s poison. I like your take on this.
Delicious! (And I love the mini-Bacchus in the picture too.)
It is poignant to again and again read how love can be so closely described as vices do (like drinking). Great contribution, I loved the line about the sheets a lot!
‘tipsy moon between your sheets’ … very cool … and I gotta believe: the first time those 5 words ever lined up quite like that.. Smiles.