spill a journey
bring us
lull of shimmer-
grins; come
bubble-breeze us open
shimmer
silver-
lines on clouds.
come un-shadow us
un-jar its scent in rose
then
let’s skip in leaves, dance
let’s twist
a tangerine
as autumn melt
un-greened by fireplace
let’s fall in love
The Autumn by Alphonse Mucha
A second Quadrille for Kim’s dVerse. Dancing with all the words.
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October 12, 2016
Björn Rudbergs writings 
I love this autumn dance!☺🎶🎵
love the use of the prefix “un” in such unexpected places…such as un-shadow and un-greened. Delightful dance!
“a tangerine
as autumn melt”
LOVE.
Perfect use of all the words. And yes, thank goodness for hyphens! 😉 I wonder how many weeks/Q44 words before we throw in the towel?
Love the ‘un’ word usages and this
“dance
let’s twist
a tangerine”
much love for this
You managed it again, Bjorn…stellar use of all our past words.
I like the way this bounces and wordplays.
Beautiful and excellent word play.
I like the playful nature of this, Björn
So glad you came back with another Björn quadrille, with its playful language and wicked words! I love ‘shimmer-grins’ and ‘bubble-breeze’, and the use of ‘un-shadow’, ‘un-jar’ and ‘un-green’ – yes, that’s what autumn does! Best of all – ‘twist a tangerine’!
Kim stole my thunder, I see. Nice use of hyphenation to create a lovely whole.
Absolutely lovely!