Come night and dazzle me with tinsel eyes
let silver soak the water; lend the songs
of moon and stars; amaze me tender, strong.
Massage me soft; let’s dance as butterflies.
Come lightly; razzle me to tingled cries,
let petals roll on frictioned fingertips
please trance me numb; caress me with your lips
let’s fly together let us soar on skies.
Come fright me; hassle me with jingled lies
let’s start all over and undo the ties.
Moonlit night by Ivan Kramskoi
Tonight Lill leads us into poetics at dVerse and wants us to use razzle, dazzle and sparkle… you might dance and have fun in disco lights or you might let yourself be seduced as me… use one or all three of the words and have fun. Pub opens very soon…
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October 4, 2016
Björn Rudbergs writings 
oh those tinsel eyes —- seductive indeed! Love so many lines in this, Bjorn….you shall surely make your readers tingle in anticipation! Petals rolling on frictioned fingertips…..oh my! 🙂
The phrase “jingled lies” caught my attention. Now I will have to try to make sense of it, but it did dazzle me out of what I expected to read.
What a seductive poem! Some of us may need a moment to recover. 😉 I especially like the “jingled lies” and “let silver soak the water.”
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Love those tinsel eyes, Björn. Romantic and a little raunchy!
🙂
Come lightly; razzle me to tingled cries,
let petals roll on frictioned fingertips
please trance me numb; caress me with your lips
let’s fly together let us soar on skies.
Such beautiful lines!! ❤️
Beautifully dazzling and I love the opening line especially, setting a sparkling scene full of promise.
there are such beautiful images in these lines Bjorn, so beautifully written.
Delicious. such awesome word combos in here, B.
This is my favorite:
“frictioned fingertips”
I love your “odd” use of nouns for verbs. They do add such dazzle to your poetry.
Whoop, whoop! That tangling together of the senses, very sexy stuff.
tinsel eyes, jingled lies. a dazzling piece indeed Bjorn!
“trance me numb” — what a wonderful phrase!
let’s start all over and undo the ties.
razzle, dazzle and sparkle!
Sure in for a terrific time. The young people are not over with only once but with repeats all round. Great!
Hank
Bjorn. What can I say.
My favorite lines:
Come lightly; razzle me to tingled cries,
let petals roll on frictioned fingertips
please trance me numb; caress me with your lips
Seductive! and your readers get pulled right in to your soul and mind.
This poem razzled me and sparked an inspiration of poems to come. 🙂
I love this body of work my friend. 🙂
Woot (!!) to the sensual and seductive razzle-dazzle you’ve got going on there! Delicious turns of phrase and imagery.
Beautiful picture and an ecstatic poem…nice!!
The night definitely dazzles us with its lustrous charms.
everything about this is just gorgeous.
love the night sky, the moon and stars depicted here.
Written by a firefly with ink on his wings. Stunning.
You have lovely images and sounds here.
Earthy and erotic, each line so captivating!
“let silver soak in the water” is only one of many lines that I love.
“lend the songs
of moon and stars; amaze me tender”…that really strikes my fancy
this was one of you more romantic writes of read of yours. lovely, mi amigo !
A very seductive write, Björn!
Beautifully haunting, Bjorn. Makes me want to dance in the moonlight in a Victorian nightdress!