Striations on the hallow stones

From graves below, in oak-tree’s shadow, hark!
A sudden stir in fall’s fermenting leaves;
and there from deep beyond a blood filled bark
from beasts and monsters, daggered thieves
who breed in graveyard ash, from broken bones,
and claw striations on the hallow stones.

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Today it’s quadrille at dVerse, De hosts and have select the word shadow, which fits with some horror theme, that’s actually a whole month early. If you decide to participate don’t forget it’s 44 words exactly including the selected word. I wrote an English sestet with rhyme scheme ABABCC.

September 26, 2016

34 responses to “Striations on the hallow stones

  1. Quite a contrast to Stevenson”s poem! Nice and chilly. An excellent rread for a chilly night. I imagine in October you will be cranking up the volume! I love “fall’s fermenting leaves”.

  2. You shine in the aura of any quadrille, brother. I just get an idea & start writing, then trim it up at the 44 mark (even more restrictive than the old 55’s we all wrote a lot back in the day for Mr. Knowitall)–but here you go creating form, rhyme & meter–kudos to your creativity.
    I love the lines /daggered thieves/who breed in graveyard ash/.

  3. Whoa….this is chilling….I have a friend from Sweden living here in my neighborhood. He’s 6’5″ and we call him “The Swedish Axe Murderer”. He’s not, he’s a love of a man, but he evokes a sort of terror just by his scowls. This poem…quadrille does the same thing.

    Bravo!! It’s terse, tense but oh so good.

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