She shimmered
hair a halo,
cheeks are rosed with breeze
with bubbled grin
in giggled dance
to lull, to melt and make
my heart skip beats.
In waltz and twist
she spilled green
put a spell on me.
A puppeteer
to pull my strings
A second Quadrille for my own prompt rose at dVerse. I tried to use every word we have had for our Quadrille prompt in one poem as well.

You rose to the occasion!
Very inventive words.
Ah, see Bjorn, you are going to force me to learn new things… at least new to an Americentric reader. I have only the power of Google to save me from ignorance. Water spite or water spirit. Now I can taste, hear, feel and see your poem in better light and higher fidelity. Knowing of what you speak… at least in part. Great poem, I thought, even before I grokked it. Even better now!
Wow, you and De are so good with weaving all the quadrill words in 1 post. I love the spell of words, bravo!!
Excellent! Not only invoking Undine but using our past words!
What a clever, overachiever you are 🙂
Delightful. She spilled green–really like this fantasy.
What clever fun, Bjorn…excellent, enjoyed every word…past and present!
Fabulous lines, love it..cheeks rosed with breeze is just so descriptive….
Damn, Bjorn! Yours words are as mysterious as they are beautiful.
Excellent. >
Wonderful
Beautifully written.
You clever poet, you. I hope to meet his challenge before Thursday, as well. 😉
A fresh, inspired “take” on a classic theme – a wonderful piece – the spell of love – when even the flaws cast their own shimmer.
I love the way you play with words, Bjorn: ‘rosed with breeze’, ‘bubbled grin’ and ‘giggled dance’ – you are a poem puppeteer.
As soon as I saw “shimmered”, I knew it! Bravo!
ah, I think you have fallen under a magical spell
A wordsmith at work. Well done!
Your expressions give the fae the beauty, the true one that seduces us. I really like that the descriptions do not feel overly pompous, it makes the poem feel so much more real.