13 responses to “My sacred sister spring”

1. So many great lines come from groups of unaccustomed words!

   • It’s so fun.. and even if you only find a few sentences you can use it to spin a poem.

2. At first I read “my being” as “be my ing” – which I LOVE. 🙂
   Love those marble lips, and this fantastic personification of spring, throughout. These are sooooooo addicting.

   • I agree, and you can use them to create whole new poems. As seeds.

3. I love this. My favorite phrasings are “you woman-girl,” “my sacred sister breeze,” “we kiss, champagne-blush,” “explore and bleed,” “embrace concrete,” and “let the secrets die.”

   My very favorite is “embrace concrete.” Such a loving word paired with hardness, a noun that connotes scraped knees and loneliness.

4. I love the stringing together of the words Bjorn ~ How magical and a gem to read tonight ~

5. This is even better than the previous attempt. Amazingly coherent, and with a sweet mood.

6. That’s a really creative way to write a poem, Bjorn. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne

   • It’s fun and addictive

7. I really like “perfume my being”…you are rocking these magnetic poems, Bjorn. . I tried one but not sure how to get it onto my blog…do I have to go through Facebook?

   • I actually just did a screencapture… (or rather i used the snipping tool in windows)…

     • Thanks Bjorn..I will give it a whirl.

8. So many wonderful phrases in this. Lovely.

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