To be an olive soaked in gin
would mean that I would wet your lips
and slowly sip by sip
I would slip inside your skin
I would make you sink and sing
in my martini drunkenness.
So come and gently feel the roundness
of the olive in your cocktail.

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June 7, 2015
Now THAT`s what I call a real dirty martini:)
haha Extra dirty
Clever, I love the way you put words together. My fave line is, “I would make you sink and sing”.
Evocative and creative!.
That’s a mighty sexy martini. Damn. 🙂 Good work.
Hummmm….now when I eat an olive, I will think of you! Fun to read.
I’m pretty much speechless, if you can believe that. 🙂
I take that as a compliment.
As you should! (Hey, my comment at dverse is sitting in your spam folder; can you approve it, please?)
When you comment the first time at dVerse it sits a while .. your comment is approved (and it will not be spammed anymore)
Ah – this is either very sensual or very creepy. I can’t decide which. Smiles.
I think it can be both and some fun as well.
sink and sing…mmm….thinking about that !
oh so sensual. nicely done.
What fun. The photo is fun as well. A different way of wooing or flirting for sure. Being fond of dirty martinis and olives, this does tickle my funny bone. I like the “slip in your skin”.
Bet there was some pimiento in that olife…
excellent take on the image…..yummy!
Now THIS is an interesting place to reach from the prompt! You’re invited for cocktails at my gaff any time you like! ☏
A spirited tongue in cheek versification of what, one can only surmise, is a common cocktail olive reverie. Smiles.
haha – I think you have the making of a wonderful martini…I do like those green olives.
Hot. I like me some borderline poetry. lol.
beautifully put
romantic and breezy….
It is an expectation of a positive response that makes love move around filling the emptiness. Rightly so Bjorn!
Hank
An excellent write 🙂
Ooooo….!
When I heard it might be dirty, I came right over. It isn’t, though. In fact, I found it quite imaginative.
cheese filled olives vodka, dry vermooth
Beware the pointed stick of impalement!
I love it! And I adore the photo!
What an excellent reading of the image! I like the use of sibilants throughout.
Very wierd! It makes me smile.
Very creative write! I didn’t see that shape in this picture and that’s unusual for me. Your write was awesome I love good imaginations! Bravo!
oohh. the “round olive in my cocktail”? Can I have more than one? 😀
Well done, good sir
Ah, I’ll be right over. Shaken, not stirred.
Sambuca works wonders on my personality. Slick poem B.
Beautiful, sensuous, but I found it lovely as well.
Oh, the picture? I’m dying! HA!
A great use of the pic, and the pic or pick–or, I don’t know–cute, Bjorn. k.
Loved this! Fun and sensuous at the same time! 🙂
Yes , like the anti – Dita Von Teese
I will admit it. This made me laugh aloud… and then giggle. 😀
😛
I will never look at an olive in the same old way. Sexy fun!
Brilliant. My fave this week.