Byron in Venice by Ivan Aivazovsky
To the following haiku we should write an inspired haiku from this by Masaoka Shiki
kaerimireba yuki-aishi hito kasumi keri
when I looked back,
the man who passed
was lost in the mist
To me that moment when something is lost, slipping through your fingers I wanted to use another kigo than mist for my inspirational haiku. The moon or even moon viewing (tsukumi).
a fleeting moment
gazing at her pockmarked face –
moon behind her veil
Linked to Carpe Diem
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Björn Rudbergs writings 
This is resplendent.
Many thanks…
Wonderful approach!
What a lovely face, though veiled and pockmarked…this one’s definitely inspired, Bjorn.
Wonderful imagery!
beautifully done
i didn’t realize mist and moon were kigos
they can appear in any season
cheers
jzb
beautifully inspirational, Björn…pockmarked face…love it!
Great description, Bjorn. Memorable. 🙂 — Suzanne
very creative haiku using the ‘moon behind her veil’ ~
Happy Weekend to you,
artmusedog and carol
“a fleeting moment” that strikes such a plethora of human chords. Awesome.