Carpe Diem Tan Renga – Ese’s “frozen pond”

Ese of Ese’s voice wrote this marvelous haiku:

the endless night
unable to count the stars
in the frozen pond

For me the endless night is something very real as we are still close to winter solstice. But when with stars there are still a hope.

the endless night
unable to count the stars
in the frozen pond

dreams are constellations
that’s forged in diamond-wells

Linked to Carpe Diem
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January 9, 2015

7 responses to “Carpe Diem Tan Renga – Ese’s “frozen pond””

readinpleasure January 9, 2015 at 17:41 · · Reply →

Ow beautiful, Bjorn. 🙂
janicead January 9, 2015 at 22:51 · · Reply →

Stargazing, an almost dreamlike state.
Chèvrefeuille January 9, 2015 at 23:02 · · Reply →

Looking up to the stars … all those gorgeous constelations …
Suzanne Joshi January 11, 2015 at 12:35 · · Reply →

Bjorn, Lovely extension. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
adaspoetryalcove January 11, 2015 at 23:07 · · Reply →

Lovely!
Wendy Bourke January 12, 2015 at 01:59 · · Reply →

Beautiful juxtaposition in this tan renga,
Brenda Davis Harsham January 13, 2015 at 00:07 · · Reply →

Both piece are beautiful and fit perfectly.