27 responses to “Dancer in the air”

1. Oh, that happened to me once–though not in a castle.

   • With an audience?

2. Oh no, how embarrassing to have the mirror reflect this! What a sad state of royal affairs.

   • Perhaps better than the destiny of the dancer in Andersen’s tale… 🙂 At least to me it’s well known.

3. ha – i can easily lose balance when i’m dancing… just saying… smiles

   • Especially if there are those mirrors.. yes I know that too..

4. What fun this is.

   • It is fun.. lot’s of fun.

     • Who blacks out the words?

     • That is the challenge.. take a bookpage and black out anything that is not your poem.. Check out http://dversepoets.com

     • Thank you!

5. We all have one of these oh-no moments!

   • airborne moments .-)

6. hopefully she doesnt bust her tail too bad falling down…ha.

7. I would lose my balance too ~ I am tempted to do a second one, smiles ~

8. Very clever

9. so we have a slight addition… LOL.. was funny

10. You really are wound-up today; good one; guess U R the poetic energizer bunny; just going & going & going……..

11. Smiling, so much fun.

12. Amazing how far you have be en able to pare it back while staying true to the original.

13. losing balance is never good. I am tempted to try another one as I am enjoying all this creative poetry.

14. I have two left feet and I sympathize!

15. Those few lines tell a big story. Cool.

16. Bjorn, Very creative practice. It paints a definite word picture. Well done. 🙂

17. Ha…losing balance is part of dancing…at least that’s what I tell myself 😉

18. I love that picture. This just reels me in!

19. I have never seen this before. Interesting! I think I will try it with my class as a bonus-fun lesson. Very unique! And…. I enjoyed the creative poem you found.

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