two dead leaves
glazed in morning rime –
taste of candy floss

Linked to Carpe Diem
December 6, 2014
two dead leaves
glazed in morning rime –
taste of candy floss

Linked to Carpe Diem
December 6, 2014
Writing about living in two places (and times)
Poems & Stories from The Author Stew
practising for a whole life
haikai poetry matters
Running in the slow lane
The view from here ... Or here!
“Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving.” — Albert Einstein
chronicling my quarter life crisis
They look so much like dead, decomposed animals. Saw one in the yard this morning and was sure it was a dead mouse, but only a leaf.
delicious!
You brought summer in…in a clever way
Great contrasts – live and die 🙂
Very vivid and…yes, can’t deny – also yum! 🙂
Very sweet! I can see/taste it 🙂
Great juxtaposed imagery here Björn … contrasts between life and dead …
the bitterness of death against the sweet floss,
Death can be many things.. I’d be afraid to taste those dead leaves though.. 🙂
Bjorn, Lovely to see, but I’ll take your word for the taste. 🙂 — Suzanne
Brilliant!
i bet that would taste good… colorful piece
the candy floss…awesome! 🙂 nice write…i love haiku.
I’m not sure if you intended a play on rime and rhyme, but it adds a hidden commentary on the process of writing the haiku 🙂
In such a heavy world, there is magic in the gossamer threads we come upon.