autumns’s shroud –
written by those clouds
in frozen eddies
Linked to Carpe Diem
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November 11, 2014
Björn Rudbergs writings
Poetry and fiction by a physicist from the dark side
autumns’s shroud –
written by those clouds
in frozen eddies
Linked to Carpe Diem
—
November 11, 2014
Writing about living in two places (and times)
Poems & Stories from The Author Stew
practising for a whole life
haikai poetry matters
Running in the slow lane
The view from here ... Or here!
“Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving.” — Albert Einstein
chronicling my quarter life crisis
Björn Rudbergs writings 
You have a real knack with haiku’s
this is really something
I am in awe Björn…
Very beautiful!
You painted the scene in such a beautiful way.
lots of clouds and frozen eddy’s around here…it turned rather cold over the weekend…
welcome back
This has to be one of your best, Bjorn —
Amazing haiku, Björn! we can see it and feel the cold lurking…
hinting winter’s
soon to come
Bjorn, It must be getting much cooler there now. It’s even getting cooler here now. Well written. 🙂 — Suzanne
Beautifully done .. very suggestive.
The cold is working its magic right on time. Brown of Autumn shrouded by whites of winter. Great lines Bjorn!
Hank
Poor Eddie! Frozen before his time! 😉
Swiftly Passing Clouds
Beautiful… I can feel the crispness of autumn in your words.
Perfection. Gave me a chill to ponder the words.
Your decision to wrap these lovely, ethereal, less-is-more words in a haiku . . . lends a spectral mist to this frosty wisp of a piece. Wonderful!