Painting of hawk in pine-tree by Lan Ying
the pine tree –
feels the talon’s sharpness
as hawk departs
Linked to Carpe Diem
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October 28, 2014
Carpe Diem Haiku – learn from the pine tree
the pine tree –
feels the talon’s sharpness
as hawk departs
Linked to Carpe Diem
…
October 28, 2014
Björn Rudbergs writings 
Great response on Sonome’s GW-post Björn …
And they do leave an impression too, nice image also
Much love…
ha. interesting perspective….yes, it does
one last purchase before flight…
Stunning, Bjorn.
Bjorn, I can see the hawk spreading its wings and taking flight. 🙂 — Suzanne
Very nice Bjorn —
Nicely done.
Ouch 🙂
Your soul was in the pine tree as you wrote. Beautiful!
The absence of the hawk is still felt. I really like this!
Only One Feather
I can’t put my finger on it, but I feel something…some hidden secret…in this. I like this little number a lot.
You can’t put your finger on it, because the hawk’s talon might scratch it! 😉
Departing
What a striking piece 🙂
Careful thought and faultless execution – exactly what a haiku needs for perfection.