like battling kites –
tears and graying tresses
his smile is lost
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October 25, 2014
Björn Rudbergs writings
Poetry and fiction by a physicist from the dark side
like battling kites –
tears and graying tresses
his smile is lost
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October 25, 2014
Writing about living in two places (and times)
Poems & Stories from The Author Stew
practising for a whole life
haikai poetry matters
Running in the slow lane
The view from here ... Or here!
“Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving.” — Albert Einstein
chronicling my quarter life crisis
Björn Rudbergs writings 
Very sad
What a tragic photo and haiku – sometimes things just need to be said.
Very tragic haiku … and that photo heartbreaking
Such sadness & beautiful writing.
so sad for sure…what a leap you made from those battling kites…
Your haiku expresses the heartbreak so well…I can feel the visceral emotion and it brings tears.
There is a heavy sadness in this short poem. We can’t ignore this stuff but it is so hard to know what to do to help.
aw, this one got me right in the heart. so much agony in this world…
great write.
stacy lynn mar
http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/
i liked the power in your few words… anyone who has flown a kite can feel the tug of this
Raw and tragic but unfortuantely it is real…powerful haiku