To a bad Girl – In response to Karin Boye


My skin is crawling from the words we said
With sleeplessness they’re dearly paid
for you tomorrow I still anticipate
as this nervousness will dissipate

I curse and cannot settle down tonight
I stir and hope you won’t be impolite
cause tonight I know you cannot sleep
cause your darkness fills my night so deep

dark flower staring

dark flower staring

I wrote this inspired of Karin Boye’s From a bad girl
Linked to my own prompt on Real Toads I will also link to Poetry Pantry, tomorrow morning.

September 20, 2014

36 responses to “To a bad Girl – In response to Karin Boye

  1. Oh, I think it would be very hard, in fact horrendously difficult, to have someone else’s darkness fill your night. I am familiar with Karin Boye, Bjorn, and did enjoy reading the information you shared.

  2. Darkness filling your night is quite a line, stole murder somewhere. It is murder in unrequited love, esp. a suddenly. I can see how Karin may have had difficulty surviving. ESP. back then.

  3. Oh, I like the reflection to the poem, the line ‘skin is crawling from the words’ so in the spirit of Karin…and last line is so deep…love the pic of staring flower, yours? nice :)x

  4. Bad girls are hardly ever all bad. Thank you for the Karin Boye intro, I always like to see what the instigator or prompt instigator comes up with. You did not disappoint.
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  5. Björn, Karin Boye is one of my favorite poets and I enjoyed both your introduction to her and your response to ‘From a bad girl”. I like her powerful, and yet simple, words. What a pity there is no book with her poems in English. It seems one can now only find them online.

  6. Wow! This is a potent response to the theme! Thank you for introducing us to your famous Swedish poet, Bjorn.

  7. hmm…and what were those words spoken between that has you so stirring unable to dream…

    I enjoyed this read. so much so, I had to check out the piece that inspired it. I do believe this response parallels quite nicely.

  8. I’ve neer read karin Boyle. Thanks for introducing me to her. She must have had a difficult life in a conservative society. Your poem reflects some of that anxiety. Nice.

  9. Hiya Bjoorn, you caught me here straight away with: “My skin is crawling from the words we said…” Terrific!

  10. Thank you for the introduction to Karin’s work, Bjorn.
    Oh, the sleepless nights we endure replaying events in our heads. There’s always the hope that things will look differently after a good nights sleep.

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