Carpe Diem Tan Renga – Ese’s “wings of dragonfly”

Ese wrote this wonderful haiku

glittering blue
above empty riverbed
wings of dragonfly

and for me I just have to add 2 lines to make it a tan renga

glittering blue
above empty riverbed
wings of dragonfly

only its whirring song
fills the void of water

From Wikimedia Commons

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September 19, 2014

8 responses to “Carpe Diem Tan Renga – Ese’s “wings of dragonfly””

Chèvrefeuille September 20, 2014 at 00:26 · · Reply →

Nice continuation Björn …
Look for A Lovely Thing September 20, 2014 at 03:42 · · Reply →

yes!
patriciaruthsusausan September 20, 2014 at 06:23 · · Reply →

Bjorn, A very peaceful scene. 🙂 —Susan
From my Forest (@HamishGunn) September 20, 2014 at 10:50 · · Reply →

A perfect match…trying to bring the river alive…hm…might use that concept in my effort…
janicead September 20, 2014 at 18:51 · · Reply →

Wonderful thought for ‘the moment’.
Lala Rukh September 20, 2014 at 21:29 · · Reply →

Nice 🙂
Oliana @Tracesofthesoul September 21, 2014 at 05:31 · · Reply →

water can seem empty…
purplepeninportland September 26, 2014 at 21:31 · · Reply →

Perfect place of peace.