9 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – broken wings”

1. This is awesome. “Painted” is perfect.

2. Bjorn, Beautiful. 🙂 —Susan

3. Wow … just wow

4. The colors of the butterful making the grey stones beautiful … and that with its broken wings … what a gorgeous (and sad) haiku …

5. yes – sad and beautiful
   and “still” can be either adverb or adjective

   Cheers!
   JzB

6. Excellent.

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8. ah so sad … take these broken wings comes to mind.

9. I like the phrase, ‘paints the rock’, although broken butterflies make me sad – they are so beautiful.

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