15 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – dusk”

1. A great haiga – matching the picture implicitly.

2. What a image! You make the day come alive as it’s dying.

3. some cool textural things in this…the melting and exhaling…and how they play together…and then whispering…

4. Day exhales … what a wonderful line … and what an extraordinary beautiful painting … awesome post Björn …

   breathtaking dusk
   the last exhale of the day –
   night falls swiftly

   © Chėvrefeuille

   Thank you for sharing Björn

5. I like the image of “day exhaling through canopies.”

6. Beautiful melding of landscape and haiku – both exhaling. Lovely.

7. Beautifully soft

8. this could/will be used and a relaxation mantra, beautifully done.

9. Bjorn, “Day exhales…” lovely. 🙂 —Susan

10. Day exhales through canopies …. wow 🙂

11. beautiful

12. How many people actually take time to listen to the whispers of the melting daylight?

13. Those exhalations melt my heart…

    Darkness Arranges Itself

14. Day light slowly gives way. Beautifully set. Bjorn!

    Hank

15. When I visited Maui – dusk was quick. Too quick.
    When the paper said sunset at 5:30pm you had better be looking then because in just the blink of an eye the sunset melted into the ocean.

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