13 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – pebble”

1. The quick kiss of pebble touched on water – so many ripples!

2. each line is like a little lens,
   but they play well together..

3. This is so beautiful. I am speechless, so I will just applaud. 🙂

4. Very effective wording, Bjorn.

5. Been there!
   Very strong depiction

6. strong write!

7. Nice imagery in your haiku

   Much love…

8. Bjorn, Lovely. 🙂 —Susan

9. i like the way you use anthropomorphism in this haiku Björn !

10. Bravo … a beautiful sensuous haiku … love the illustration.

11. Is the kiss truly forgotten?

    Pebble Shadows

12. Romantic or scoundrel?

13. Awesome!

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