14 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – nights of summer”

1. Beautifully written tanka

   • Thank you 🙂

     • 🙂

2. Lovely piece and a beautiful painting to accompany it. It reminds me of the old maps that had sea monsters drawn in unknown areas. “There be monsters here.” 🙂 —Susan

3. lovely link to the picture in colours x

4. Beautiful. Love the day’s reflected promises. Each day does hold new hope.

5. So atmospheric–loved it.

6. Lovely tanka…I can see the sails flapping…barely moving

7. Beautifully composed tanka Björn… I was a bit surprised that you posted a tanka … not a poetry form which I have seen a lot at your weblog. Thank you for sharing.

   • I have not written a lot of tanka so far.. but I constantly change myself.. I have written quite a lot of sonnets recently.. especially looked at different variations of rhymes… and also a little bit of very unexpected contrasts…

     • I like those changes in your poetry … you’re growing …

8. Reminds me of the dity:
   “Red sky at night sailor’s delight”
   “Red sky in the morning – sailor’s take warning”

9. What a gorgeous painting! 🙂

   Loved the image of night ending in red and tangerine.

10. beautiful dawn, sense of breath

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