Carpe Diem tanka – crane

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silver wisps of mist
gently swirl with dancing cranes –
melt in rising sun

the old frog watch in awe
in safety from piercing bills

My own haiku in tan-renga making ut a tanka.
Linked to Carpe Diem

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April 26, 2014

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