the mountain shining
first light streaks through the valley
lazy clouds float by (Bastet)
once again the snow white swan
slowly sails across the lake (Myself)
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Linked to Carpe Diem
April 4, 2014
Carpe Diem Tan Renga – Bastet’s mountain shining
Björn Rudbergs writings 
Bjorn, if I have ever read anything that is perfect – this fits the bill. This is really lovely. Funny – last night I decided to study Japanese forms of poetry with a degree of seriousness. I loved this.
Another nice one!
Ah…so adapt—Lake Garda, the mountains and swans… a beautiful renga!
an interesting form. your final lines float perfectly alongside the opening stanza.
That’s nice! You used a lake too, in a graceful way..
I shall never haiku again after reading these! Well done!
Very nice continuation of the haiku by Bastet, makes this a great Tan Renga.
Sometimes I miss the new CD posts. Thanks to you I saw your piece and went back to add my voice. Well – it is true in our valley the cell reception isn’t great. And that could be a blessing 🙂
Enjoying your swan. I do get quiet a few birds at the creek side, but no swans.
Gliding along with the swan. Beautiful, Bjorn.
Lovely swan, lovely poem, Bjorn.
This is lovely, I have just entered, my first try ever, hehe, feeling nervous x