butterflies
flutter long the path –
weightless thoughts
Butterflies by M.C. Esher
Linked to Carpe Diem
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February 11, 2014
Carpe Diem Haiku – Jorakuji
Björn Rudbergs writings
Poetry and fiction by a physicist from the dark side
butterflies
flutter long the path –
weightless thoughts
Butterflies by M.C. Esher
Linked to Carpe Diem
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February 11, 2014
Writing about living in two places (and times)
Poems & Stories from The Author Stew
practising for a whole life
haikai poetry matters
Running in the slow lane
The view from here ... Or here!
“Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving.” — Albert Einstein
chronicling my quarter life crisis
Now we see through a glass, darkly
Ah….if only I could have written one like that! I was looking, thinking, trying to find the right haiku…and there it is, written by you!
Ah.. you flatter me…
its true though. linked you at page bottom.
Weightless Thoughts … what a great line Bjorn and that painting by Escher (my fellow dutchman) is really gorgeous.
Haiku is extraordinary difficult, more so, much more so, than tanka…but you have succeeded here in my opinion. Gorgeous stuff, Bjorn….and obviously you have studied the classical forms….that is a BIG issue for me, because people think that they can throw out all of this stuff…
Thank you.. I tried to capture at least a little with kigo an cutting word. But still more important for me is that moment of a thought that tries to elope… I write every day on Carpe Diem… 🙂
I will look into this site….have heard of it before.
And yes, the kigo word would be butterfly….summer season word. I like that….moment of a thought that tries to elope!
Jane
But learning the kigo, etc…strengthens your poetry….and you have gone into the center of the issue.
Bravo!~
Lady Nyo.
A delightful illustration – I have much to learn about haiku – each butterfly a teacher, as you are.
Thank you for your visit to my CD post today.
Beautiful!
looks like you have a butterfly thing going on… weightless thoughts these frigid days seem nice… I do agree sunshine is better than gloom
Oh so beautiful!
so beautiful!
ha. cool the connection between butterflies and those wieghtless thoughts….
I am so attracted to weightless thoughts. Love the art too.
There’s something light and lilting about this haiku!
Chanting with the Sun
Beautiful! I love seeing butterflies fluttering about! Awesome! ♥
very nice and ; thanks for attending my online birthday party
much love…
Excellent!
Beautiful. Especially pared with the Escher!
Beautiful piece and a picture that fits it perfectly.