fearless vice – cinquain for Carpe Diem

touching
in fearless vice
unleash the passions felt
afterwards in pangs from treason
forget

The embrace by Egon Schiele

Linked to Carpe Diem
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December 13, 2013

8 responses to “fearless vice – cinquain for Carpe Diem”

Glynis December 14, 2013 at 03:07 · · Reply →

That was beautiful!
unawarebutunderlined December 14, 2013 at 03:13 · · Reply →

Ooooo….yes!
kaykuala h December 14, 2013 at 04:06 · · Reply →

Oh yes! Very succinctly expressed, Bjorn! Nicely!

Hank
readinpleasure December 16, 2013 at 14:33 · · Reply →

Wow!
Chèvrefeuille December 16, 2013 at 20:59 · · Reply →

A very strong sensual cinquain Björn.
atrm61 December 16, 2013 at 22:25 · · Reply →

This is simply brilliant Bjorn-loved the closing!
Sharmishtha Basu February 1, 2014 at 10:11 · · Reply →

amazing, so much captured in a form poem!
Zane November 15, 2016 at 17:43 · · Reply →

This is awesome. You should write some more of these. I accidentally clicked on something that brought me to your collection of cinquains. Very cool form.