7 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – In Light and Darkness

  1. This was a prompt found very hard, but you put a lot into it. There is that great juxtaposition there I read about but don’t dare try, between the second and third lines. Here it works, not just well, but in a way that makes one understand haiku.

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