by the shallow pond
reflection drawing northern fowl
a warm sun shimmers (Joanne)
silence falls from withered leaves
tell her of his winter lies (Björn)

Cobweb Morning by Efim Volkov
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November 17, 2013
by the shallow pond
reflection drawing northern fowl
a warm sun shimmers (Joanne)
silence falls from withered leaves
tell her of his winter lies (Björn)

Cobweb Morning by Efim Volkov
Writing about living in two places (and times)
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What an awesome completion Bjorn. Thank you for sharing.
Beautiful, beautiful completion.
Lovely, sad and moving. (The plural of leaf is leaves… a minor fyi.)
Thank you – and mistake is corrected
Sometimes silence can seem so loud, don’t you think? 🙂
I suspect it’s where he lies that is the issue, no?
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Human relationships are so complicated! There must be an easier way to relate to each other than through lies and half-truths and all the things we say to obfuscate. There must.
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dramatic tone, well done
much love…
very moving……lovely
Moving completion.
Oh this is gloriously stark and sadly true in many cases!Fabulous completion Bjorn-loved where you took this!
sad, about the lies, but enjoyed your completion ☺
Sad and evocative. I really like this one.