12 responses to “Carpe Diem Tan Renga – Steph’s ”The Eucalyptus””

1. Nice and a bit suggestive 😉

2. I really LIKE the word pictures you paint in your post scripts to others’ haiku…what does “tan renga ” mean? is it a form? (will look up)

   • It means that you get a haiku from someone (Steph in this case) and you write a response in 7+7 syllables.. (in essence a collaborative tanka

3. Lovely unexpected conclusion, Bjorn 🙂

4. Yep, snakes in Oz. Nice completion. Thought this was a tough one.

5. Great images in your completion!

6. You have made it into another sphere by your stanza Bjorn … a bit scary, but also nice, the twist is so right chosen. Very nice completion.

7. yikes! quite unexpected.

8. I’ve been surprised by tree snakes in Eucalypts before 😦

   The Eucalyptus

9. I hate snakes, though I like this! 🙂

10. Chilling . . . that snake makes me shiver. Ugh!

11. You terrified me with this one Bjorn!I don’t like snakes and this looks vicious!But still,a beautiful and strong completion:-)

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