13 responses to “Carpe Diem haiku – Garry Gay’s “New Snow””

1. This reminds me of Lemony Snicket’s writing. Love it.

   • Ah.. sounds interesting… need to read.

2. Oh! That is nice. Great job! 🙂

3. This haiku has surely the same sense, tone and spirit as the haiku by Garry Gay. Very well in touch with Garry’s.

4. And yet..you might pass by the tracks often,without a glance. Nice haiku.

5. Connects very well with Garry’s! Nicely done Bjorn!

   Hank

6. a bit of ambiguity here
   very nicel

   Cheers!
   JzB

7. Mysterious….like the first snowfall!

8. There’ s that mysterious beauty and presence of the winter in your haiku. Beautiful, Björn.

9. your verse often leave me satisfied, on the one hand, and very curious on the other….thank god we only have 2 hands..

10. one can read this over and over and get different thoughts every time. love reading this one. thanks.

11. Some things—and people—are worth forgetting! 😉

    New Snow

12. Vanishing in layers of snow. Wonderful thought.

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