17 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Shell”

1. Oh so sad today, Bjorn…hope it is only the painting that is melancholy!

   • One of the poets on dVerse have passed away… so it fits there as well

     • Oh dear. So sorry to hear that.

2. perfect
   goodness only Picasso and you together could portray such melancholy

3. My condolances for losing one of your poetry friends on dverse. This haiku sounds like an in memory … nicely done. I read a few poems written by your friend Dave King.

4. Oh, it is melancholy, it is! 😦

   Desert Shell Motel

5. Bjorn, this is so beautiful.

6. I can relate to this, especially the empty shell aspect. Tragic, in a way, but that’s life sometimes…

7. may the poet who passed on recently rest in peace, Bjorn. an aching heart moment for sure. beautifully written.

8. Aching heart echoes… oh! that is so painful. A very sentimental take, Bjorn.

9. I think we both had similar thoughts today Bjorn 🙂

   by the shore

10. Haunting and beautiful. Thank you!

11. Beautifully moving tribute, Bjorn.

12. in an empty shell
    mouth closes here and opens
    with shout of joy there

    Your poetry inspires me. Thanks.

    • Ah love the positive note.

      • So rare from me recently. 😉

13. that’s just the way it feels!

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