18 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Yanagi Chiru (Willow leaves fall)”

1. Wow! What can I say … I am speechless. Can I use it for one of our upcoming Tan Renga Challenges.
   I would be honored.

   Kristjaan (Carpe Diem)

   • I would be more than happy.. When you say it.. It’s really a beginning of a tanka too..

2. Geisha’s tears… a moment perfectly captured. Lovely haiku, Bjorn.

3. well penned and evokes strong emotion ~ carol ^_^

4. I’m in awe too. Bravo!

5. You have mastered the art of subtlety in your poem(s) Lovely!

6. Beautiful.

7. The ending caught me by surprise—and delighted me!

   Willow Leaves

8. Your Monet did not prepare me for the Geisha;s tears, well done!

   summer birds have flown

9. Melancholy, but a lovely read.

   Shedding Willow

10. wow, I’m in awe!

11. so poignant, my first reaction was physical….ah, losses….

12. this really is stunning
    wow

    Cheers!
    JzB

13. this time, I took the time to read the comments, too. And suddenly, all has been said. 🙂

14. Excellent…bravo !
    Peace
    Siggi

15. beautiful.

16. Sadness, though beautiful…another gem of yours.

17. If the rain isn’t silent neither are the willow leaves. Good collation.

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