Carpe Diem Tan Renga completion to Managua Gunn’s wonderful haiku.
cricket’s last song
even the prostitute hears –
stops waving her fan
I wanted to combine this with a sense of silence. A brief relapse between the dirge of her work with clients.
So this is what I came up with:
A street prostitute by Utagawa Kuniyoshi
cricket’s last song
even the prostitute hears –
stops waving her fan
while orange harvest moon
spills gold in silent pond
—
September 20, 2013
Björn Rudbergs writings 
Luscious words Björn, luscious.
Anna :o]
Thank you… lots of fun writing renga.
This was very beautiful Bjorn. >KB
Thank you 🙂 a real joy to write after Managua’s poem
beautifully done.
You’re link at CD is broken.
Cheers!
JzB
Thank you 😉
The silent pond is a sweet touch.
Beautifully completed Tan Renga Bjorn. Really well done.
Kristjaan (Carpe Diem)
this is really lovely. absolutely. ♥