In Carpe Diem Tan Renga we complete a haiku with a completion to make it a 5 line tanka. The haiku this week is by Fellow Carpe Diem haijin Wabi Sabi
The haiku is:
at sunrise –
no words between lovers
just a kiss
This is my complete poem:
at sunrise –
no words between lovers
just a kiss
lips recalls the softness
in her parchment skin

Sun over Saint-Paul de Vence by Marc Chagall
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September 8, 2013
Parchment skin really… sweet and romantic.
My thought was that of an old couple finding new passion
I liked how you represented it.
You always have the most amazing images in your posts that go great with your poetry!
A nice completed Tan Renga.
well, wow!
lovely.♥
Oh this is a wonderful ending to my haiku! Thank you!